WT1: LETTER TO A FRIEND

CORRECTION

Dear Katy,

How are you? Last Monday I saw your brother Erik on the street.  He told me that you are very busy. 

I’m going to have a party in my house in three days’ time. I’d like you to come to my party.

In the party there’s going to be a lot of games, music and so on. As it’s a pyjama party, you have to come on you pyjamas!

For dinner, we are going to have pasta, chicken and for dessert, strawberries with chocolate. Do you like this? Have you got any allergies? If you have any other ideas, please let me know.

I hope you’ll come. I can’t wait to see you!

Love,

Mireia

SELF-ASSESSMENT

I've organized well the invitation letter, with paragraphs and greeting lines. 
The content is also appropriate and I'm using the language worked in class.
However, I realize I need to remember about registers, as I mix them sometimes! I also feel I'm not too sure when to use "will" or "going to"... I'll need to ask.